Friday, 29 January 2021

Y12: Lockdown Lit 4.2 | Some eternal villain - 4.2 pt. 2

Hello Y12,

We’re keeping it simple today. I want to buzz us to the end of Act 4 Scene 2. The rest of the scene is fairly straightforward and I want us to be ready to start the next scene (which is an important one) next week.

 

You’ll find all the work on the powerpoint below. Just three things to do today:

  1. a quick recap
  2. reading and annotating
  3. an exit quiz

The video will give you some key facts for the exit quiz, so pay attention! And apologies for the dodgy edit and abrupt ending...


Let me know if you have any problems or need any help.

 

Mr M

Tuesday, 26 January 2021

Y12: Lockdown Lit - Week 4 | Interrogation (Act 4 Scene 2)

Hello Y12,

 

Today, we’ll get started on Act 4 Scene 2 of Othello.

 

You’ll find all the work on the powerpoint below. There’s a trickier quiz to do, some reading and annotation, a bit of criticism to read and few questions to answer. There’s an extension task to do if you get through it all.


Please share your question doc on Google Classroom later on.

We’ll meet up to talk through the questions at 2.45.

 

Let me know if you have any problems or need any help.

 

Mr M

Friday, 22 January 2021

Y12: Lockdown Lit - Week 3 | Lodovico arrives (4.1)

Hello Y12,

 

Today, we’ll finish off Act 4 Scene 1 of Othello. More absolute scenes in this bit!


Click here to go to today's recorded lesson.

Don't forget to speed me up. It's less painful that way!


You’ll find all the lesson resources on the powerpoint below or on Google Classroom. There’s a quiz to do, some reading and annotation, and a paragraph to write.


Please upload your paragraphs on Google Classroom by Monday.

Let me know if you have any problems or need any help.

 

Mr M

Tuesday, 19 January 2021

Y13: Revision | Paper 1 Section C

Hello Y13,

 

Section C (Aspects of Tragedy: Salesman/Keats) – 50 mins

 

This seems to be the one you’re most worried about, but remember: you’ll only write for each text for about 20 minutes each! So this question is all about choices. Choose your content and quotes wisely – and plan!

 

Another concern in Section C is time. If you over-do it on Sections A & B and end up short of time for Section C, you may end up only writing for 10 minutes on each text. The result: GENERALISING (Band 2). I’ve seen A grade students do this and score 6 or 7/25.

 

So, remember:

 

  • interpret the key words in the question
  • decide on the most relevant moments in Keats and Salesman
  • break the task down into parts (e.g. argument, counter-argument, two different focuses, or even simply Salesman/Keats)
  • analyse the writer’s dramatic methods as you write
  • reach a confident conclusion

 

The third bullet-point above is particularly important in Section C, but it’s simpler than you might think. You need to decide how to break the task down into two or three main paragraphs (aside from the intro/conclusion). Sometimes there are two distinct areas than need addressing in turn. Take the example below:

 

In this question, there is a need to explore ‘moments of happiness’ before considering the ‘outcome’. This would usually mean beginning and end. In this kind of two-part question you might write three or even four main paragraphs. E.g:

 

  1. Moments of happiness in Keats
  2. Moments of happiness in Salesman
  3. Tragic outcome in Keats
  4. Tragic outcome in Salesman

 

Or it could work in three paragraphs as in my plan above. Alternatively, you could just write two main paragraphs: one about Keats (moments of happiness and how they relate to the tragic outcome) and one about Salesman.

 

In other questions, probably in most questions, it’s simpler to go with this two main paragraph structure:

  • Intro
  • 1) Salesman
  • 2) Keats
  • Conclude

 

For example, see the two essays below:


 

This next document contains ideas about how to unpick a question, with plenty of extra questions to practise on:


Take a look at this extract from the 2017 examiners' report on Section C which deals with the ‘moments of happiness’ question:


Don’t forget, there were more Section C questions on a doc on the previous blogpost.

 

Finally, two general A Level Lit resources that work for all sections in both Paper 1 and Paper 2. Again, these documents come from a senior examiner.

First, here is a lot of advice for writing great essays for AQA Lit B, including advice on how to deal with each section:


And here is a True or False quiz to address misconceptions about the exams, based on the AQA examiners’ report:

 

I think that’s all I have for now. Let me know if you have any further questions. I’m sure I’ll remember something else shortly.

 

And finally, the plan for next week:

 

Monday: I’ll send Section A before the normal lesson time (via email).

Try to get it back to me at the end of the normal lesson time or as quick as you can afterwards.

 

Wednesday: I’ll send Section B. Same as above.

 

Thursday: I’ll send Section C in the morning. You can do the question at a time to suit you before the end of the week.

 

That okay?

 

As always, get in touch if you have any queries or thoughts or… anything.

 

Mr M

Y13: Revision | Paper 1 Section B

 Hello again Y13,

 

Next up: Section B (the Othello essay) – 50 mins

 

This is the trickiest question on the paper. It requires you to go through the following steps:

 

  • interpret the key words in the question
  • understand the debate you are entering into, and your position on it
  • decide on a sensible starting point and key moments to explore
  • structure a coherent line of argument
  • analyse the writer’s dramatic methods as you write
  • reach a confident conclusion

 

That’s a lot to juggle. The initial thinking about interpreting the question and deciding the structure is make-or-break, and it can lead to vastly different responses to the same question. In contrast, Section A is formulaic and Section C is much easier to focus and plan an argument.

 

We need to practice the planning stage of Section B questions… LOTS.

 

Here’s another powerpoint from a senior examiner on our A Level spec to help you with Section B. It contains some practice questions, lots of advice and a sample answer.

 

This document contains more practice questions, both for Section B & Section C (but more on C tomorrow):

 

Don’t forget, I’ve already posted model Section B answers here and here and here and here.

 

Next time – Section C. Won’t be long.

 

Mr M

Y13: Revision | Paper 1 Section A

Hello Y13,

 

In the next three posts, I’m going to share some resources and tips for each section of Paper 1.

 

First up: Section A (the extract) – 50 mins

 

This question will present to you a pivotal moment in the tragedy. Basically, your job is to:

  • annotate the extract, looking for a) aspects of tragedy and b) dramatic methods
  • give an overview of the passage and establish its position and significance in the tragedy
  • in the main part of your response, you need to focus on the most significant aspects of tragedy in the scene, one per paragraph, while analysing the dramatic methods used within the scene
  • you finish your response by evaluating the significance of the extract in the tragedy, especially giving a sense of how the extract changes the trajectory of the tragedy and how it affects the audience.

 

The powerpoint below is something I stole from one of the senior examiners for AQA A Level Lit B. She’s the one who does all the teacher training for this spec, so if she says it, it’s worth listening to.

Have a read through. There are some great tips and examples of that introductory overview.

 

The next doc (download here: WORD | PDF) contains some extracts to practise on, as well as revision questions to test your understanding. There’s a model answer at the end too.

 

Finally, here is a revision task (WORD | PDF) to help you get to grips with Act 5.


I’ve already posted a number of Band 5 exemplar responses on Google Classroom. Have a look here and here and here.

 

I’ll be back soon with a blogpost about Sections B. I know that some of you are concerned about Section C, so I’ll get that one out asap.

 

Let me know if you have any questions.

 

Mr M

Monday, 18 January 2021

Y12: Lockdown Lit 3.1 | Othello retires

 Hello Y12,


We’ll be starting today’s work with a Google Meet at the normal lesson start time (11.25am). In this time, we’ll go over some questions from last time. Bear with me, it’s my first attempt at a Google Meet and I’ve tried to set it up through a ‘Question’ task on Classroom.

 

I’ll talk you through today’s work in the meeting too. I’ve also got a few reminders for you.

 

Today’s extract and video is a longer one. We’ll do the last little section of the scene on Friday.

 

Below, you’ll find the powerpoint for today’s lesson. It’ll be on GC too.


Mr M

Thursday, 14 January 2021

Y12: Lockdown Lit 2.2 | Othello's trance (4.1)

Hi folks,

 

I've changed my mind about the live debrief today. My video is too long and it'll be too rushed.

 

Instead, I'd like you to complete the work on the powerpoint below (download here). You may have done the first couple of tasks already. We’ll do our live debrief at the start of next lesson before we move on.



 

Let me know if you need any help,

 

Mr M


Tuesday, 12 January 2021

Y12: Lockdown Lit 2.1 | Understanding poetic metre

Hello Y12,


Today, I’d like you to develop your understanding of the poet’s art. We’ll learn more about poetic metre, poetic forms, rhyme schemes and scansion. This will be useful knowledge for studying both Keats and Shakespeare.

 

There’s enough work here for two lessons. There will be a quiz and a choice of writing challenges at the end.

 

Here goes:

 

1) First, take a look at these poetic feet (rhythmic patterns that repeat):


 

2) And now have a look at these meters:


By combining these rhythmic patterns and line lengths, you get your metre. For instance:

 

Iambic pentameter:   . / . / . / . / . /

Anapaestic hexameter:   . . / . . / . . / . . / . . / . . /

 

The key feature is the number of stresses. Penta means five. All lines in iambic pentameter must have 5 stresses, but they don’t all have 10 syllables. 11 syllable lines are common. Consider the most famous line in iambic pentameter:

To be, or not to be, that is the question. (11 syllables!)

 

The resources below should explain this.

 

 

3) Watch this video about scansion.

 

4) And this video about ‘why Shakespeare loved iambic pentameter’.

 

5) This clip explains some variations within iambic pentameter.

 

6) Now, take a look at this powerpoint about iambic pentameter and how it works in a sonnet:

 

7) And take a look at this powerpoint about different types of rhyme and line endings:

 

 

Now, our poet, Keats, wrote a handful of truly great sonnets. Check out two of my favourites below. The first is a Shakespearean sonnet and the second is a Petrarchan sonnet:

 

 

I think Chapman’s Homer is my favourite sonnet, even though it has a historical inaccuracy in it.

 

8) Test your understanding with this quiz.

 

9) Finally, I’m going to challenge you to write some verse in the first of what I’m going to call METRICAL CHALLENGES.

 

This is something I tried with Y7 (!) last year during lockdown and they were amazing at it. Look! Surely, Y12 Lit students can do better?

 

Below, you’ll find a series of challenges which increase in difficulty. You need to choose one, complete it, and then send me your work in an email. Capisce?

 

Challenge Level 1 – Rhyming couplets:

 

Challenge Level 2 – Quatrains:

 

Challenge Level 3 - Ballad opening:

Read the first three stanzas of these ballads:

Miss Gee – W.H Auden

Death in Leamington – John Betjeman

The Rime of the Ancient Mariner – Samuel Taylor Coleridge

 

 

Challenge Level 4 – Shakespearean Sonnet:  

 

 

Challenge Level 5 – Petrarchan Sonnet:

 

I look forward to seeing what you come up with!

 

That’s all for today. On Friday, we’ll resume our study of Othello, picking up at the start of Act 4.

 

Enjoy your week and stay safe,

 

Mr M

Thursday, 7 January 2021

Y12: Lockdown Lit 1.2 | Annotating LBDSM

Oh hi!

Today, I’m going to give you an in-depth analysis of La Belle Dame Sans Merci and ask you to annotate your copy of the poem, if you have one. If not, print one if you can (download it here). If you can’t, watch the video anyway and come back to annotate when you’ve received your anthology.

 

Disclaimer:

I’m still new to recording myself. The video is longer than I intended. I need to buy a microphone. I waffle on a lot. I can only apologise. (I advise you to speed me up to 1.2x, or even 1.5x!)

 

The video comes in two parts:

Part One

Part Two

 

I’m also going to share this study guide to the poem. There are plenty of resources and notes on this poem online, but this is pretty comprehensive:

 

Finally, a challenge! Get to work at the task of learning this poem by heart.

This old blogpost of mine gives you some tips and resources to help you do it.

 

That’s it for today. Next week, I’ll be teaching you about metre, rhythm, rhyme and scansion. To appreciate Keats’s artistry, we need to understand and experience the constraints he placed upon himself in working within traditional poetic forms. To this end, I’ll be getting you to have a go at writing in each of the forms which he utilised in the four poems we’ll be studying. Exciting, eh?

 

Until then, take care.

 

Mr M

Tuesday, 5 January 2021

Y12: Lockdown Lit 2021 (Week 1)

Hello Y12, 

(Year 13, if you're reading this, you're on the wrong post!)

 

Welcome to Lockdown Literature on my A Level Blog! I’ll be using this space to post resources as it gives me a bit more flexibility than Google Classroom. Or perhaps I’ll just post stuff there instead. I don’t know yet. I’m also toying with the idea of trying some live lessons and recorded lessons. What do you think? You can tell me on this brief questionnaire.

 

We’re going to start this year by revisiting the work we started on Keats just before Christmas, then we’ll get back to Othello in a week or so.


This week, I’m going to give you a load of reading and a big old list of tasks to complete and later in the week I’m planning to send you a video to help you annotate the poem.

 

Here’s your first set of tasks for this week:

 

1) Make sure you’ve read and annotated the material I gave you about Keats before Christmas.

There’s a short bio here and a more detailed one here.

 

2) Re-read La Belle Dame Sans Merci:

 

I.

O WHAT can ail thee, knight-at-arms,   

  Alone and palely loitering?         

The sedge has wither’d from the lake,    

  And no birds sing.

 

II.

O what can ail thee, knight-at-arms!               5

  So haggard and so woe-begone?

The squirrel’s granary is full,        

  And the harvest’s done.   

 

III.

I see a lily on thy brow       

  With anguish moist and fever dew,               10

And on thy cheeks a fading rose  

  Fast withereth too.           

 

IV.

I met a lady in the meads, 

  Full beautiful—a faery’s child,   

Her hair was long, her foot was light,              15

  And her eyes were wild.  

 

V.

I made a garland for her head,     

  And bracelets too, and fragrant zone;   

She look’d at me as she did love, 

  And made sweet moan.            20

 

VI.

I set her on my pacing steed,        

  And nothing else saw all day long,        

For sidelong would she bend, and sing  

  A faery’s song.       

 

VII.

She found me roots of relish sweet,                 25

  And honey wild, and manna dew,         

And sure in language strange she said—

  “I love thee true.”  

 

VIII.

She took me to her elfin grot,       

  And there she wept, and sigh’d fill sore,                   30

And there I shut her wild wild eyes        

  With kisses four.   

 

IX.

And there she lulled me asleep,   

  And there I dream’d—Ah! woe betide! 

The latest dream I ever dream’d           35

  On the cold hill’s side.     

 

X.

I saw pale kings and princes too, 

  Pale warriors, death-pale were they all;           

They cried—“La Belle Dame sans Merci 

  Hath thee in thrall!”                  40

 

XI.

I saw their starved lips in the gloam,      

  With horrid warning gaped wide,          

And I awoke and found me here,

  On the cold hill’s side.     

 

XII.

And this is why I sojourn here,             45

  Alone and palely loitering,          

Though the sedge is wither’d from the lake,     

  And no birds sing.

 

Read it as a comic strip here!

 

3) Answer these questions on the poem. You can share your doc with me when you’ve finished. You can download the doc here: WORD | GOOGLE DOC | PDF

 

4) Remind yourself of these interpretations of the poem:

 


5) Read this information about the ballad form and answer the question at the end in an email.

 

This poem is in the form of a ballad. Look at the four examples of ballad stanzas below to figure out how a ballad works:

 

Let me tell you a little story

About Miss Edith Gee;

She lived in Clevedon Terrace

At number 83.

 

 

He did not wear his scarlet coat,

For blood and wine are red,

And blood and wine were on his hands

When they found him with the dead,

The poor dead woman whom he loved,

And murdered in her bed.

 

 

Oh, East is East, and West is West, and never the twain shall meet,

Till Earth and Sky stand presently at God's great Judgment Seat;

But there is neither East nor West, Border, nor Breed, nor Birth,

When two strong men stand face to face, tho' they come from the ends of the earth!

 

This is the tale that was told to me by the man with the crystal eye,

As I smoked my pipe in the camp-fire light, and the Glories swept the sky;

As the Northlights gleamed and curved and streamed, and the bottle of "hooch" was dry.

 

Read up on the ballad form here and here and here.

 

You’ll notice that La Belle Dame Sans Merci is made up of quatrains which rhyme abcb.

 

Take a look at the pattern of stressed syllables in the first stanza:

 

O what can ail thee, knight-at-arms,   (4 stresses)

       Alone and palely loitering?     3

The sedge has withered from the lake,      4

       And no birds sing.     2

 

The final line in each stanza is either an abrupt, two-stress line (which makes the poem seem to be characterised with a sense of awkward abruptness) ­– or it contains three stresses and sounds a bit more naturally ballad-like.

 

What is the impact of Keats’s use of the ballad form in this poem? How does it contribute to the poem as tragedy? Send me your answers in an email.

 

 

Finally, I’m going to share an important resource with you: the Critical Anthology.

You’ll get a paper copy of this when you’re back in school. It contains introductions to six important areas of literary criticism:

 

  • Narrative theory
  • Feminist theory
  • Marxist theory
  • Post-colonial theory
  • Ecocritical theory
  • Literary value and the canon

 

To put it another way, these are different critical lenses through which you can read a text. You'll need to use two sections of this anthology as part of your coursework next year.

 

6) Here’s what I’d like you to do as a starting point:

 

a) Choose one of the following critical lenses: Feminist, Marxist or Ecocriticism

 

b) Read the section of the anthology which you have chosen.

 

c) Come up with a list of 5 things a reader might find interesting about La Belle Dame Sans Merci when reading from your chosen critical perspective. Alternatively, you could write a paragraph.

 

Worked example:

 

I’m going to consider the poem from the point of view of narrative theory.

 

Narrative theory (or narratology) concerns ideas about how texts are contructed.

 

Here are my observations on La Belle Dame Sans Merci from the point of view of narrative theory:

 

  • There is a circular structure to the poem which has the following effects: a) it creates a sense of stasis and hopelessness, b) it foreshadows the tragic trajectory of the poem and creates a sense of inevitability
  • There are three separate voices in the poem: an unidentified narrator who encounters the knight and introduces the poem, the knight himself, and the voices of the pale kings and princes.
  • The poem can be seen as a type of tragedy in that the sense of extreme joy and fulfilment of the initial encounter turns to imagery of hopelessness and death, but there is no clear resolution as the knight is still alive at the end.
  • The story is full of narrative gaps: who is the initial narrator? What does ail the knight? Who is the lady? Why does she weep? What does she represent? In what sense does she ‘lull’ him to sleep? How long has the knight been ‘palely loitering’. This leaves the poem open to a multitude of interpretations.
  • There is a narrative frame, provided by the unidentified narrator; this distances us from the story.
  • There is plenty of repetition – as you’d expect from a ballad.
  • How reliable is the narrator’s story? Was the knight really ever in control? Does he misinterpret her? And who labels her ‘La Belle Dame Sans Merci’? Why does this label seem to clash with the way the knight presents her?
  • The poem, like many of Keats’s poems (and Othello) has two worlds or two contrasting settings: the wintery stasis of the cold hillside and the rich, warm, sensuous world of the meads.
  • In terms of characterisation, the characters are flat and seem to fulfil stereotypes. The knight comes from the same world of power as the pale kings and princes. The lady is the ‘other’. None of the characters is developed. They seem to work as symbols.

 

Now it’s your turn. So:

 

  • Pick your ‘critical lens’
  • Read the relevant section of the anthology
  • Email me your bullet point list of observations from that critical perspective.

 

You can include your comment about the effect of the ballad form in the same email. Don’t forget about the questions on the poem too.

 

I look forward to seeing what you come up with. We’ll share your ideas next time.

 

That’s it for now. I reckon there’s a good 1.5-2 hours of work there. Later in the week, I’m hoping to share a video to help you make final annotations to the poem. I'm also going to challenge you to learn the poem by heart!

 

Let me know if you need anything.

 

Mr M

 

P.S. Don't forget to fill in the questionnaire, if you haven't already.