Sunday, 29 March 2020

Lockdown Literature 2.1

Hi folks,

I'm keeping things simple today as we're still getting everyone up to speed and I don't anyone to fall behind. Some of you have had to play catch-up with the Desdemona essay and several of you were self-isolating in the last week. Well done for catching up and thanks for the essays. I just have a couple left to mark.

First, a couple of reminders if you're still catching up:

And now for today's work (to be completed by Thursday): 

1) Read Isabella lines 226-337. Make some initial annotations using the resources on the previous blogpost. I'll add more of my notes later.

2) Update your summary sheet:


3) Make notes on the following questions. You can print the doc or download it to add your notes.

 

Please let me know if you need any help. 

Mr M

 

Thursday, 26 March 2020

Lockdown Literature 1.2

Hi folks,


First, a reminder of where you should be:
  • You should have read and annotated up to stanza XXII of Isabella.
  • 'Isabella on a page' should be completed up to XXII.
  • Stanzas 14-22 recap (on the brothers) should be done.

In addition, you should make sure:
  • your Desdemona essay is emailed to be by Friday, if you haven't done it already
  • you spend some time organising your folder/notes before school resumes

Here's the next set of three tasks - to be completed by Monday 30th March.   

1) Complete this quiz on Isabella & Keats.

2) Read lines 177-225 of Isabella and fill in the next two rows on 'Isabella on a page' (XXIII-XXVI & XXVII-XXVIII - see pic below)

3) Use one of the following resources to annotate your anthology from 177-225:
 

Not too much this week. I want to give those of you who have missed lessons a chance to get caught up.

If you are up to speed and want a little more to do, here are some extras:


1) Take a look at the Othello stuff on this thread from MASSOLIT

2) Quiz yourself on Othello quotes.
3) Read your Connell Guide to Othello. 

I hope this is all clear and straightforward. If you need anything, comment or email.


Keep on keeping on,



Mr M

Saturday, 9 November 2019

Harvest: Mr Quill and his charts

Hi folks,

Following our lesson on the symbolic significance of Mr Quill on Friday, I decided to devote a blogpost to explaining my thoughts about this character - hopefully in a clearer and more convincing way.

Let's consider what we know about Mr Quill so far (at the half-way point of the book):

  • His real name is Philip Earle.
  • He is introduced in Chapter 1 when his presence unnerves the villagers; he is 'marking down our land'.
  • He is a chart-maker, a record keeper; but he has an artistic flair, an appreciation of beauty and a romantic disposition .
  • He is a 'pleasant man' of about 30; he has a 'a townsman's beard, a wealthy beard'.
  • He has a 'stiff arm and shoulder on his left'; he is a 'stumbler'.
  • He is the subject of mockery from the villagers on harvest day.
  • When the villagers confront the strangers, Mr Quill shows the 'greatest bravery' and 'courtesy'; Thirsk later calls him 'brave and bloodless'.
  • He plays the fiddle at the harvest feast in Chapter 3.
  • He enters into village life by choosing the Gleaning Queen; he opts, 'sweetly', for little Lizzie Carr.
  • When he and Thirsk go off to chart the land, they start at 'Turd-and-Turf', their 'open privy' (toilet) and 'charnel place' (where animal carcasses are deposited). It is their dumping ground, but Mr Quill thinks it is 'humbling in its beauty' and re-names it 'The Blossom Marsh' on his charts.
  • He is interested in the names of plants and trees, and keeps leaf samples "for pressing in his book, his personal 'Natural History'. It seems that listing them is his way of knowing them".
  • Edmund Jordan sees Quill as a fool and openly mocks him for his deformity. Quill is not afraid to stand up for himself and for the villagers who will be dispossessed. He is the only one to openly speak out against Jordan.
  • In Chapter 8, in which Thirsk and Quill prepare the vellum for his final charts, we learn about his backstory: he has never been in love, never married, his parents are dead, he suffered from a 'sudden palsy' as a child which left him 'wooden' from the shoulder to the ribs.'
  • Quill says he fears for 'us' - the villagers. He is evidently putting down roots in this village. He also fears for Mistress Beldame.
  • At work: 'He is experimenting, hoping to discover what coloured patterns he can devise to make the story of our farmscape...'
  • He creates two maps: one as the land is now and one as it will be when it has been converted into a pasture for sheep.
  • Thirsk finds his work dishonest: it's too colourful, too effortless; he finds it hard to recognise it and work out where everything is.

At the end of this blogpost, you'll find my notes on the extract from last lesson.

So, what conclusions can we draw from all this detail? Here's my rambling attempt at an interpretation:

Mr Quill can be seen as a symbol of representation and artifice. As a chart-maker, his primary role is to create official documents that chart, measure and label the land. But he's an artist and a romantic too; perhaps his character is better suited to the role of the artist. He is humane, sensitive, sympathetic and a lover of the natural world. His colours are too vivid and his romantic nature leads him to mis-label and misrepresent the world; his re-naming of 'Turd-and-Turf' as the 'Blossom Marsh' demonstrates his unreliability as an observer and recorder of reality. 

He doesn't quite seem to fit in with either the world of the village or with his employer and fellow gentleman and townsman, Edmund Jordan. Indeed, he is openly mocked by Jordan for his humanity and empathy towards the villagers, as well as for his disfigurement. Perhaps Crace's depiction of Quill as weak and disfigured represents his status as outsider, or perhaps it depicts the powerlessness of the humanist and the artist in this brave new world of ruthless efficiency, progress and prosperity. Quill does not belong in this brave new world and seeks a home amongst the villagers who are about to be dispossessed; he is a man out of time and place, a man from a bygone era.

Mr Quill is a collector and recorder of names and labels. He is eager to find out the names of all of the flowers and plants; he keeps cuttings and presses flowers into his book, which he calls 'his personal Natural History'. This latter word is significant. Mr Quill is an artist by temperament; he represents the village through his artful experimentation with colours and shapes. But, in a sense, he is a historian too. A historian creates a representation of events and civilisations and communities; he creates a record of the world for a future in which that world no longer exists. Because Mr Quill's charts are 'dishonest', the history he is leaving behind of this village will be dishonest too. In effect, once the village is transformed, there will be no accurate record of the lives of the villagers. 'Turd-and-Turf' will cease to exist. Somewhere, a lost piece of vellum will record instead a 'Blossom Marsh' which never existed.

Mr Quill will leave behind two maps: one is a map of the village as it is now, a 'dishonest' image of a 'brawny-headed man' . The other is a map of the future: a brawny-headed man who has 'lost his face'. Mr Quill's charts are an imperfect record of these two worlds on whose boundary the events of the novel take place. They also provide Thirsk with a new perspective - an aerial view that no human has ever seen. Just like when Thirsk sees himself in the mirror at the Manor House, this image provides us with a sudden and startling view of objective reality. It takes Thirsk a while to come to terms with this new perspective, but once he has, it makes perfect sense and will alter his perception forever. This reflects how the new reality of Jordan's ownership and enclosure of the land will suddenly seem inevitable and natural after the initial shock.

It is said that 'history is written by the victors'. If Mr Quill's charts are to be seen as a representation of history, then they are a well-intentioned but inaccurate effort which are blighted by too much artistic licence. In creating his charts, he is 'experimenting' and trying to 'make the story of our farmscape.' In reality, he is writing a fictional history. Once Jordan's transformation and decimation of the village is complete, there will be no trace and no record of the village as it actually was. Quill's charts show Thirsk an apocalyptic revelation of the termination of their way of life. Just like in Yeats's 'The Second Coming', we get a glimpse of the world that has spiralled out of control until 'the falcon cannot hear the falconer'; the world to come is alien, terrifying  and uncertain, but by the time we have realised where we are, it is too late to do anything but wait for the inevitable. Crace does not try to re-write or re-direct the arrow of history. He is not arguing that capitalism and modernity can be combatted and defeated. Instead, he gives us an unseen perspective of it from the point of view of the losers and the dispossessed, perhaps with the aim of making us reflect on the excesses of capitalism and the victims of sudden, irreversible social change. 



I hope this makes sense. Remember, we are only half-way through the text; Mr Quill's story is far from over. From here, we need to see how Crace develops the symbolic meanings of Quill and his charts, and how he develops the themes of representation, history, art and nature.
 
Thanks for reading. My notes are below (click to enlarge).


Mr M 




 

Monday, 9 September 2019

Othello - Useful links and resources

Hi folks,


Chiwetel Ejiofor and Ewan McGregor onstage in Othello (2007)
The internet is awash with great  Othello resources to support your study.

As we begin working our way through the text, it is a good idea to go away and clarify/reinforce what you've learnt. The resource packs I gave you today will help; for example, after studying a scene, it would be useful to have a read through the scene summary and analysis in the story pack. Look after this stuff - you'll need it through the course and especially for revision in the second half of Y13.

Here are some of the most useful Othello resources out there:




No need to do anything with this stuff now, just have a flick and get an idea of all the great stuff that is out there to help you. Maybe watch the Othello rap.

I'll add more stuff as I find it. If you find anything great that you want to add, just let me know or leave a comment.


Mr M

Thursday, 16 March 2017

Lamia and the experiencing self

Hi all,
The triumph of Bacchus by Cornelis de Vos.


I just wanted to clarify where we got to today. There are a lot of complex ideas at play in Lamia, but once you get your head around it, it’s the easiest poem to interpret of the four. So stick with it. Next week, we’ll annotate the opening together.

Hopefully, you agree that the conclusion of the main task today is that Keats offers an ambivalent presentation of Lamia at the start of the poem. The mythical Lamia was a child-devouring monster, but this Lamia is beautiful and alluring (as well as seeming devious and manipulative).

Perhaps then, it is better to reserve value judgements for now and look for another way to define her.

Instead, we looked to define her in terms of her association with what Daniel Kahneman calls ‘the experiencing self’ (see his TED talk on the subject here). The ‘experiencing self’ is the part of us that seeks pleasure in the present moment. Sigmund Freud talked about ‘the pleasure principle’, the idea that we instinctively seek pleasure and seek to avoid pain. He saw this as the driving force guiding the id.

Remember, Keats said ‘O for a life of Sensations rather than of Thoughts.’ This suggests he wants the id to take prominence in his life. However, we also know that he held back from his pursuit of Fanny Brawne because of financial and societal pressures. Like Lorenzo, ‘honeyless days and days did he let pass’. Not only that, but Keats was terrified of publishing ‘Isabella’ because he thought it was ‘too smokeable’ – in other words, he thought the critics would hate it. So, rather than acting on his spontaneous, poetic impulses, Keats had a tendency to let thought overrule sensations. The ‘superego’ had power over the desires and impulses of the Keatsian ‘id’.

So, let’s consider how Lamia is presented at the start of the poem:

LAMIA:
Beautiful – ‘dazzling’, ‘brilliance’ colourful (‘vermillion’, ‘golden, green and blue’)
Complex and hard to define – ‘gordian shape’
Sexual/physical – ‘ruddy strife of hearts and lips’, ‘ravished’
Excitable – ‘palpitating’
Impulsive, driven and manipulative – ‘let me have once more my woman’s shape’, ‘grant my boon’
Enchanting/alluring – ‘she lifted her Circean head’
Passionate/loving – ‘for Love’s sake’ ‘I love a youth of Corinth – O the bliss!’
Powerful – ‘by my power is her beauty veiled’
Associated with beasts and gods/creatures of pleasure – ‘satyrs, fauns and Silenius’ sighs’ (Silenius was a companion of Bacchus, the god of wine)
Associated with misery and suffering – ‘some penanced lady elf’, ‘Ariadne’s tiar’, ‘Proserpine still weeps for her Sicilian air’
Associated with evil – ‘some demon’s mistress, or the demon’s self’, ‘serpent’

Taking these ideas together, it is easy to see her as a representation of the physical, the sensual, the sexual – an embodiment of the id or of Freud’s pleasure principle. She acts out of a need to have her heart’s desire – and to enjoy it in the present moment. Her beauty represents her desirability, but that in turn associates her with shame and punishment. Her ‘palpitating’ nature and the changing appearance of her skin (‘full of silver moons, that, as she breathed, dissolved, or brighter shone’) represent her ‘gordian’ complexity: good/evil, beautiful/ugly, villain/victim. Perhaps she is neither good nor bad. If associated with the id, she represents sub-conscious desire/pleasure. Only the rational eye of the superego labels it good or bad.

The references to Bacchus, Silenius, satyrs, fauns etc. are important as the Cretan landscape at the start of the poem is a world of beauty and pleasure where love flourishes for Hermes (‘Real are the dreams of gods’, ‘nor grew they pale, as mortal lovers do’.) Satyrs are creatures with goat-like features who attend upon Bacchus. The animal characteristics suggest that these characters live for sensations rather than thought. They focus on food, comfort, pleasure, sex. However, the rest of the poem is set in the world of mankind, where, as we have seen, love is fleeting, happiness is transient and death is inevitable.

For next lesson, make notes on the poem so far, up to line 207. You can find help with this here and here. Use a dictionary to look up unfamiliar words.

You also need to be annotating the other poems too. We don’t have time to do it all in class.

Be ready to annotate the start of the poem next lesson. Make sure you have ideas to offer, especially with regard to this idea of Lamia as the sensual, experiencing self. 

Hope this helps. It’s definitely worth investing the time in Lamia – it’s easy to write about once you know it.




Mr M

Saturday, 17 December 2016

Memorising La Belle Dame sans Merci

Oh hi,


Inspired by this blogpost, I've come up with an easy method of learning La Belle Dame sans Merci. Taking this easy-to-learn poem into the exam with you (in your head) is something I regard as a non-negotiable requirement.

This method uses a mnemonic which turns the poem into a shorter poem, or six bullet points:

  • The sedge, so haggard
  • A lily, I met
  • A garland, I set
  • She found me, she took me, and there she lulled me
  • I saw pale kings, their starved lips
  • Sojourn

Follow these steps. (Y13 - you are probably ready to jump to step 4):

1) Read and re-read the poem.
2) Use this set of Quizlet cards.
3) Try using these prompts.

The above steps are designed to ensure that you know each stanza. 

The final steps are to ensure that you know the structure of the poem so that you can put it all together:

4) Use the powerpoint below. Go through slides 2-13 to remember the images and mnemonic.
5) Use slide 14 to practise. I'll be using this to test you later!
6) Now use slide 15. You could try building a memory palace to remember the mnemonic.

Here's the powerpoint:




Once you know it, you could try using your fingers to remind you of the 12 stanzas. In the examples below, the little finger of each hand contains two stanzas:




Give it a go.

Have a great Christmas!


Mr M